2013년 1월 29일 화요일

Using fake ID card _ debate


When you were young, have you ever used the fake ID card? Almost all people want to be an adult in their childhood. When I was nineteen, my friends were twenty. I wanted to enjoy the adult place with my friends. So I used to another people’s ID card. How about this situation do you think?  I think it should be strictly punished.

 

I have three thesis. I will talk about why they should be strictly punished. First, it is surely illegal to use fake ID card. Next, they don’t think it is serious. Finally, teen court is not effective.

 

Using fake ID card is serious problem in our society. Seoul news reported that fake ID card is easily made by internet market. Also number of booked students is very high in Korea.

 

Most children want to be an adult. It is illegal to use fake ID card. Heraldcorp reported that their purpose is buying cigarettes or alcoholic beverages. Also they can enter the off-limits to students. Some people might said, there are many problems in the world and it is only small problem. However, one man said in the movie, big thing come from small beginnings.

 

These days, teenagers are very free and make easily some serious crime. They don’t think about that is not serious. Herlardcorp said that they can easily find fake ID card anywhere. Some people might say that teenagers can need chance. However, they usually abuse their chance. So we must teach them.

 

Korea has law for teenagers. But teen court is week. If they use fake ID card, they must sentence to 10 years in prison. Also, business owner can be stopped their business. But this law rarely use. Not effective. Some people said, if we compress children, they more go to the bad. I agree. But I think

 

In my opinion, this situation is surely illegal. They don’t think serious. Also korea teen court is quite week. Finally I think the law against using fake ID card must strong.

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